Preface:
It has been over 2 years since I
started to write. From aimless amateurish writing to making it a serious hobby,
it has been an interesting metamorphosis. One important pit stop in this
journey is this attempt to write a story in a series of episodes. I had this
thought as a distant plan once upon a time; I now believe I am all set for it
with ample time in hand before I start my management masters later this year.
‘Brewing up some romance’ is
intended to be a simple light-hearted love story; I wish to communicate the way
I see love and romance; the way I would want to feel love in my life. I thought
for a first attempt at writing stories this genre would be the ideal start
given that all life I have been inspired by love in some form or the other. I
know translating the feeling of love to words would not be a child’s play. I
only have the honesty of thought to accomplish this precarious task. Let us see
how it goes. Hope all of you like it.
Episode 1: ‘The four-letter word’
It was 8 in the evening. The family was in
full attendance for dinner on the dinner table. It was a practice for the
family to have food together. Cook Palani had everything ready in order to
start.
‘Prayers first’, Balan said as he sat, before
anyone could start.
‘Needless to say, dad! It has
become a habit. I have done my prayers. God wants me to eat now’, 19 year
old Vijayalakshmi (Viji), Balan’s only daughter replied.
‘So...Idlys and chapattis for today!’,
cook Palani opened the dishes.
Ten minutes went by concentrating on food without a word uttered. Balan’s
wife Geetha peeked at every plate other than hers’ to see to that Viji didn’t under
eat and her husband didn’t over eat. Balan was irked with the attention his plate was getting. He decided to
break the silence around the table so that he could get some respite from his
over-caring wife.
‘Palani, how is your wife doing
now?’, Balan floated a question. Knowing Palani and his chatty nature, his
job to divert attention was done hands down.
‘She should be fine. She is not with me now. She has
fled with her new found love, Nair. I wish she is happy now’, Palani replied with
a touch of regret and lots of warmth for his wife.
‘That is nothing I should be
disheartened about. She left me not because she didn’t like me; she left because she
liked somebody else’, Palani was calm and collected.
Viji, just at the end of her teens, was all ears to Palani. She couldn’t
miss noticing the sincerity of love in Palani’s eyes for his wife given what
had happened.
‘Nair is a good man. He must be
taking care of my wife very well’, Palani went on, his tone far from
lamenting.
‘They were working together in a company. I think they should have fallen in love then’, Palani’s monologue
seemed it had no end.
The thing about the characteristics of people who occupy a low profile in the
society, who generally are without an audience, is that they speak their hearts
and souls out in a hint of a chance offered to them. They search for affection
in everyone. They move with no egos.
Palani was one such. His descriptive nature comes from his loneliness
and the want for affection. Each of us has been a Palani at times. How often
have we felt lonely even with so many relatives and friends around?
Viji was confused with the fact that Palani showed no hate for his wife after
the incident. Balan couldn’t accept the fact either while Geetha was already in
admiration for Palani’s resilience and purity of love.
‘Love can be blind sometimes. But
not this time; Nair looks very smart; way better than I do. I have seen him once.
It must be for his beauty that my wife fell for’, Palani even managed to
smile when saying this.
Viji couldn’t find even an iota of frustration or anger in Palani, very
much to her surprise. She rather found him to be happy for his wife.
‘Don’t you feel angry for what she
did anna?’, Viji couldn’t refrain from asking.
‘Why should I? She chose the one she liked. How
could that make me angry?’, Palani said as
he moved to serve a chapatti to Balan.
‘This beauty thing is a trap. When you
go behind it, you would end up bored of it one day. She will then come back one
day’, he sounded a touch philosophical.
Geetha chipped in with the most obvious question, ‘Would you, in that case, take her back?’
‘Why not! What wrong has she done?’,
Palani said dismissing the question as if it was a stupid one.
Viji was getting a lesson what the four-letter word actually meant. She,
the teenager, influenced by movies and fictional stories couldn’t have
understood love the right way. For movies, serials and drama do nothing more
than exaggerate or trivialize love in equal measure.
She understood cinematic absurdities like cutting one’s veins or tattooing
the name of the lover on the body can’t be the epitome of showing one’s love.
She now knew love was not what she actually thought it was; or for that matter
what most of us think it is.
Balan could strike a chord with Palani now and was happy Viji was
hearing all this right at the brink of her prospective love life.
Dinner was done. It was time for bed. Viji’s thoughts couldn’t move any further
from Palani anna for that night.
4 weeks later:
Viji had just joined college in her hometown Coimbatore. She was hoping college to be a dream time of 4 years for her. She was anxious and all set for her first day at college. Her home was 50 minutes away from college and preferred to use the college bus to commute between home and college.
One fine morning on the college bus, Viji met Karthick.
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End of Episode 1 -
Credits-
Episode1 : An Inspiration from K. Balachander’s Kai Alavu Manasu.
Cheers,
nagappstheblogger!!!
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ReplyDeleteGood start dude!!!! :) :)
ReplyDeleteHow many episodes should we expect? Cuz I would like you to give me everything in one shot pls :D :D
Couldn't wait to read it fully!! Looking forward to its end!! :) good luck:)
ReplyDeleteGud work da proxy..... Short and crisp for the first episode..... Keep up.... :)
ReplyDeleteYou’re off to write a story. When it comes to that, before you get into whole plot thing, you got to establish your characters strongly and one way or another so well that the reader could discern who is talking when a dialogue is uttered without ever have to look who said it. I know we’re first timers to this, but that’s just my opinion.
ReplyDeleteI liked the Palani’s opener and Inserting our own monologues into the story might look laid bare and disconnected. Rather let it go with what characters would say. Nice of you to give credit to KB.